well, fuck

[rone]

I just realized that the last two lines of my trocheepome don't scan. I feel like a total failure.

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[ronebofh.livejournal.com]

I thought about that, but if i do that, then it doesn't rhyme, and it still won't scan, because the last two lines combined have 15 syllables, not 16. Hell, the last line, as i wrote it, is iambic! Such cruel irony... Maybe that's the ticket, i'll just pass it off as a post-postmodern commentary on the prison of scansion.