Thanks! I think i've been pretty lucky with it all. It's by far the longest piece i've ever written and i thought it'd end up being about half its current length.
At the end (which is very close), i'm going to collect it all in one page and throw it out for criticism, which it badly needs; yes, it's entertaining, but are the writing fundamentals good?
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Date: 2006-09-11 05:14 am (UTC)At the end (which is very close), i'm going to collect it all in one page and throw it out for criticism, which it badly needs; yes, it's entertaining, but are the writing fundamentals good?