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entombed in the shrine of zeroes and ones ([personal profile] rone) wrote2005-10-04 09:50 am
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haiku

    the sun screams above;
    our embarrassed skin blushes —
    oh melanoma

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[identity profile] ottobeatriscuit.livejournal.com 2005-10-04 10:00 pm (UTC)(link)
Very nice. I giggle.

[identity profile] ikkyu2.livejournal.com 2005-10-05 03:27 am (UTC)(link)
This is the crappiest Petrarchan sonnet I've ever seen.

[identity profile] mezdeathhead.livejournal.com 2005-10-05 04:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh my goodness. Move over, Shakespeare. The new poet that doesn't know it is in town.

[identity profile] schwa242.livejournal.com 2005-10-05 06:50 pm (UTC)(link)
It works as haiku and can be sung to the tune of "Macarena".
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